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Freedom of a Bird

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The golden sand upon the shore,
The salty smell of sea.
The water lapping at our feet,
The sea spray in the gusts of wind.
The crashing of the water,
Beating on the rugged rocks.
All this I can know of,
Standing by the mesmerizing sea.

The trailing lengths of slender rope,
The smoothness of the fabric,
The utmost joy that lifts my heart,
As I watch the brightly coloured kite
Flit across the crests of waves,
In that turquoise ocean.
All this I can feel,
Standing by the midnight blue sea.

I watch the little kite
Skim across the sky,
Ride along the currents,
Dance among the soft white clouds
And waltz partnered with the breeze.
All this we can witness,
Standing by the deep blue sea.

Then suddenly the rope snaps;
The kite becomes a bird
And gets carried
Away with the gentle wind.
Oh, how I long for freedom,
The freedom of a bird.
All this we can yearn for,
Standing by the sparkling sapphire sea.

Oh how I wish I had some wings
So I could flit among the cotton clouds
With my little bird.
So yeah. This was a poem that I wrote after thoroughly bending, twisting and somewhat mangling the criteria for my North Shore homework. I honestly couldn't write something moderately good about something I don't feel anything for at all, namely a random starfish or a man with a girl (probably his daughter) flying a kite by the sea. It was supposed to be exactly that, but I changed it a little. Okay, a lot. Luckily, my teacher found it in herself to still accept my poem, even giving it an 'A', which I was rather pleased about.

Enough of my rambling! Enjoy, and please comment if you can. They are all read and appreciated. Thank you for stopping by.
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Seriusly. People should read more poems. But instead they only look at perfectly drawn pictures, MLP and big breasts. And all those well written stories and poems go under...
Oh, what a shame. :no: